Title: My Version of the An Heroes RPG
Description: Not by Kyta.
Corruption - December 3, 2009 12:42 AM (GMT)
Nellie Lovett - December 3, 2009 12:46 AM (GMT)
Why is there an apostrophe? That suggests a possessive and makes no sense.
| QUOTE |
| “Sorry! I have to run! I left my football at Ryan’s house! yelled back Matt |
There's no end quote, and 'yelled' should be capitalised. Also, 'yelled back Matt' sounds kinda awkward. 'Matt yelled back' makes more sense.
Where's the period? ._.
Corruption - December 3, 2009 12:48 AM (GMT)
Fixed the apostrophe and period thing. And i write like that.
Nellie Lovett - December 3, 2009 12:54 AM (GMT)
It's an awkward style.. it doesn't really sound right. :/
Corruption - December 3, 2009 12:55 AM (GMT)
Corruption - December 6, 2009 01:12 AM (GMT)
SilverWolf101 - December 6, 2009 05:40 AM (GMT)
Kyta - December 6, 2009 05:30 PM (GMT)
I need to write my version of this. I'm hoping I'll get a chance in the Christmas holidays... 2000 words per day woot woot?
Corruption - December 7, 2009 01:03 AM (GMT)
Yey. Sort of.
Can a mod change this thread's name to "An Heroes: The Remake"